I update the outline to include the changes to chapter 2 and flesh it out a bit more.
Read MoreIntroducing Zuri, the gardener and cook. She is also Eden’s best friend.
Read MoreIntroducing Oliver, the butcher. He receives meat from Jude and prepares it for the towns folk.
Read MoreIntroducing Luis, the mute tracker and Jude’s best friend.
Read MoreTo make things better fall in line for the end of the story I am changing Rebecca to be a doctor.
Read MoreDo we really need a second group of MCs? I go over my thoughts on this.
Read MoreShould chapter 2 be a flashback? I list advantages and disadvantages of each.
Read MoreI read the fifth draft of chapter 1 of Bug.
Read MoreI have incorporated all of the changes in chapter 1’s fifth draft.
Read MoreThe story’s antagonist needs a new name. Lets go over some of the choices I considered.
Read MoreThe story’s antagonist needs a new name. Lets go over some of the choices I considered.
Read MoreI go over the physical descriptions of our 2 main characters.
Read MoreThe before and after of the school scene rewritten.
Read MoreI discuss the school section of chapter 1 of Bug.
Read MoreThe 3rd edition of the outline for Bug, a preparedness and survival story. This draft incorporates the recent story changes.
Read MoreI answer a list of questions I recently posted.
Read MoreIntroducing Jude, one of our main characters. He is the son of Nathan and Rebecca and brother to Eden.
Read MoreIntroducing Eden, our new main character. She is the daughter of Nathan and Rebecca and sister to Jude.
Read MoreI research some youtube videos on variations on insects that could be adapted into the story.
Read MoreI consider options for rewriting the first line of Bug to make it more powerful.
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