Brennien Coker
Web Developer and Author

Bug: Coming soon

The School

For the chapter 1 rewrite I discuss the weakest part of the original version of chapter 1, the school. With our new MC we should be able to rewrite this section from scratch.

 
My Progress
Security of Sanctuary - The Wood
Security of Sanctuary - The Wood

Lets take a closer look at the wood outside of the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence secure resources.

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Security of Sanctuary - The road
Security of Sanctuary - The road

Lets take a closer look at the road to the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence hide themselves from travelers.

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Security of Sanctuary - The Perimeter
Security of Sanctuary - The Perimeter

Lets take a closer look at the perimeter of the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence have secured themselves from attacking bugs and marauders.

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Security of Sanctuary - outskirts
Security of Sanctuary - outskirts

Lets take a closer look at the outskirts of the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence have store their materials and miscellaneous supplies.

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Security of Sanctuary - residential area
Security of Sanctuary - residential area

Lets take a closer look at the residential area of the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence have secured themselves from bugs and each other.

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Security of Sanctuary - Heart of the town
Security of Sanctuary - Heart of the town

Lets take a closer look at the heart of the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence have secured themselves from attacking bugs and marauders.

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Problems with chapter 2
Problems with chapter 2

As I am writing chapter 2 I recognize there are some issues with Sanctuary. The security of this town does not make sense and I have a plan to fix this.

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The First 2k words of Chapter 2 first draft
The First 2k words of Chapter 2 first draft

The first 2k words of chapter 2 first draft.

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The First 1500 words of Chapter 2 first draft
The First 1500 words of Chapter 2 first draft

The first 1500 words of chapter 2 first draft.

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The First 1200 words of Chapter 2 first draft
The First 1200 words of Chapter 2 first draft

The first 1200 words of chapter 2 first draft.

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The First 900 words of Chapter 2 first draft
The First 900 words of Chapter 2 first draft

The first 900 words of chapter 2 first draft.

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Main Character - Jude
Main Character - Jude

Introducing Jude, one of our main characters. He is the son of Nathan and Rebecca and brother to Eden.

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Jude the Tanner?
Jude the Tanner?

As I write chapter 2 and try to introduce the next main character Jude, I find his current profession unappealing. Perhaps he needs to go in a different direction.

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Chapter 2 first draft reading first 700 words
Chapter 2 first draft reading first 700 words

I read the first 700 words of chapter 2’s first draft of Bug.

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Chapter 2 first draft week 1 recap
Chapter 2 first draft week 1 recap

I go over some points that I was able to introduce in chapter 2’s first draft during week 1 of writing.

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Side Character - Teddie
Side Character - Teddie

Introducing Teddie, the guardsman.

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The First 700 words of Chapter 2 first draft
The First 700 words of Chapter 2 first draft

The first 700 words of chapter 2 first draft.

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The First 500 words of Chapter 2 first draft
The First 500 words of Chapter 2 first draft

The first 500 words of chapter 2 first draft.

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The First 300 words of Chapter 2 first draft
The First 300 words of Chapter 2 first draft

The first 300 words of chapter 2 first draft.

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The First 150 words of Chapter 2 first draft
The First 150 words of Chapter 2 first draft

The first 150 words of chapter 2 first draft.

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Chapter 2 outline updates
Chapter 2 outline updates

I update the outline to include the changes to chapter 2 and flesh it out a bit more.

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Side Character - Zuri
Side Character - Zuri

Introducing Zuri, the gardener and cook. She is also Eden’s best friend.

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Side Character - Oliver
Side Character - Oliver

Introducing Oliver, the butcher. He receives meat from Jude and prepares it for the towns folk.

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Side Character - Luis
Side Character - Luis

Introducing Luis, the mute tracker and Jude’s best friend.

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Rebecca is now a Doctor?
Rebecca is now a Doctor?

To make things better fall in line for the end of the story I am changing Rebecca to be a doctor.

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Do we need a second group of main characters?
Do we need a second group of main characters?

Do we really need a second group of MCs? I go over my thoughts on this.

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Should chapter 2 be a flashback?
Should chapter 2 be a flashback?

Should chapter 2 be a flashback? I list advantages and disadvantages of each.

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Chapter 1 fifth draft reading
Chapter 1 fifth draft reading

I read the fifth draft of chapter 1 of Bug.

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Draft 5 complete
Draft 5 complete

I have incorporated all of the changes in chapter 1’s fifth draft.

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Renaming Dearil Draft
Renaming Dearil Draft

The story’s antagonist needs a new name. Lets go over some of the choices I considered.

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