Main Character - Eden
Bug: Character - Eden
Eden the rebel of Sanctuary.
She is dead set on finding her father and saving her family. Even though she is not allowed to, she
Name: Eden Williams
Gender: Female
Height: 5’4”
Hair: Long thick wavy hair, light brown
Ethnicity: American, White \ Caucasian
Build: Slender, petite
Role: Student, hunter (provides skins for her brother, and meat for Sanctuary)
Eden has lost all hope for rebuilding society, and becoming civilized. Unlike her brother she believes that no matter what civilization you rebuild it will eventually be corrupted by power hungry people. She Doesn’t want to stay in the confines of sanctuary and play make believe. She wants to find her dad and fix her family. Her father taught both her and her brother how to survive in the new world. She knows he is still alive, because she knows what he taught her.
Features
Outdoorsy, she was trained by her father to hunt and survive in the outdoors before and after the end.
Smart, she is quick witted, a fast thinker. She tends to outsmart rather than overtake her obstacles.
Fit, she is physically fit and able to do most tasks that require endurance
Pragmatic, she does not expect the world to be fixed like in some fairytale.
Flaws
Young, still a student and not given all of the privileges as an adult
physically weak, her petite frame limits her muscular strength.
Emotional, she tends to follow her emotional state in situations otherwise she would be more pragmatic.
Overconfident, She often assumes she knows best even when she doesn’t.
Lets take a closer look at the road to the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence hide themselves from travelers.
Lets take a closer look at the perimeter of the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence have secured themselves from attacking bugs and marauders.
Lets take a closer look at the outskirts of the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence have store their materials and miscellaneous supplies.
Lets take a closer look at the residential area of the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence have secured themselves from bugs and each other.
Lets take a closer look at the heart of the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence have secured themselves from attacking bugs and marauders.
As I am writing chapter 2 I recognize there are some issues with Sanctuary. The security of this town does not make sense and I have a plan to fix this.
Introducing Jude, one of our main characters. He is the son of Nathan and Rebecca and brother to Eden.
As I write chapter 2 and try to introduce the next main character Jude, I find his current profession unappealing. Perhaps he needs to go in a different direction.
I go over some points that I was able to introduce in chapter 2’s first draft during week 1 of writing.
Introducing Oliver, the butcher. He receives meat from Jude and prepares it for the towns folk.
To make things better fall in line for the end of the story I am changing Rebecca to be a doctor.
Lets take a closer look at the wood outside of the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence secure resources.