Problems with chapter 2
As I am writing chapter 2 I recognize there are some issues with Sanctuary. The security of this town does not make sense and I have a plan to fix this. first lets us start at the center of town and work our way out and highlight some issues.
The heart of the town
This is the location of the shops, garden, and livestock.
This needs to have protection from small and large insects
The residential area
This is where the survivors live
This needs to have some sort of domestic policing and security
The outskirts of town
This is a buffer zone used by perimeter security and storage
A fence between the residential area and the outskirts provides additional security incase of a breach at the perimeter
The perimeter
This is a mile long wall
it is tall, 10+ feet
it is made from steel parts welded together
there are outposts along the perimeter, at least 4
The Road
The road is a security threat as it tells other survivors of your location
the road needs to obfuscated
The wood
The wood surrounds the town on 3 sides
it is a forest and breading grounds for bugs
Lets take a closer look at the road to the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence hide themselves from travelers.
Lets take a closer look at the perimeter of the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence have secured themselves from attacking bugs and marauders.
Lets take a closer look at the outskirts of the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence have store their materials and miscellaneous supplies.
Lets take a closer look at the residential area of the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence have secured themselves from bugs and each other.
Lets take a closer look at the heart of the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence have secured themselves from attacking bugs and marauders.
As I am writing chapter 2 I recognize there are some issues with Sanctuary. The security of this town does not make sense and I have a plan to fix this.
Introducing Jude, one of our main characters. He is the son of Nathan and Rebecca and brother to Eden.
As I write chapter 2 and try to introduce the next main character Jude, I find his current profession unappealing. Perhaps he needs to go in a different direction.
I go over some points that I was able to introduce in chapter 2’s first draft during week 1 of writing.
Introducing Oliver, the butcher. He receives meat from Jude and prepares it for the towns folk.
To make things better fall in line for the end of the story I am changing Rebecca to be a doctor.
Lets take a closer look at the wood outside of the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence secure resources.