The First 150 words of Chapter 2 first draft
The boar hung upside down by its legs. Its feet were tied together with a braided twine. It swung from side to side below a sapling tree. The tree rest upon the shoulders of two young men as they silently marched through the brush. The men followed a path through the dense vegetation of the boreal forest. Tall pine trees and huge ant mounds surrounded the path.
“So how many did you say you saw?” Jude asked the curly haired boy in front of him.
Without turning to face him, the boy lifted his left hand with 4 fingers.
“I’ve never seen more than one at a time!” Jude exclaimed, “Let alone four. You’re either really lucky, Luis, or really good.”
Luis shrugged both his arms, the pole effortlessly balanced on his shoulder.
“Don’t be modest.” Jude responded, “Four colossals, man that must have been terrifying.”
Luis shook his head.
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Story Idea
Lets take a closer look at the wood outside of the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence secure resources.