Character - Cole
Bug: Character - Cole (used to be Dearil)
Cole is the type of man who would survive the end of the world. A monster.
Cole is willing to destroy his own faction for his own gain.
Name: Cole “A-Hole” Wolfe
Gender: Male
Height: 5’8”
Hair: Straight shoulder cut, Brown
Ethnicity: American
Build: Average Fitness Build
Role: Marauder
We meet Cole after he was stalking our opening character. He is outsmarted by her, but soon learns that she relies on distractions to get an upper hand. Later while being set up for ambush by her, he figures she would do the same. Learning very quickly, unlike his colleges who charge after her. While the ambush works for them, Cole gets the upper hand and surprises Rebecca. Capturing her, and taking her as prisoner back to the Marauders.
***SPOILERS***
Cole is our antagonist. He represents opposition to the protagonist’s goal, which is ultimately survival. He not only wants to kill the protagonist, he really wants to kill their way of life. He is furious that a woman would be smarter than him. His fury drives him to abandon everything to enact his retribution.
Once he captures Rebecca he starts to torture her. The gang asks him to question her to learn of her shelter HQ so they can plunder it. He could not cares less about plundering, he wants to destroy all of her. Discovering she has a family, he tells her he won’t kill her until after he has killed each of them. He allows Rebecca to escape and the Marauders to fall, and stalks her to the Sanctuary where he sets her and her family up to be ambushed. His only desire is to utterly destroy Rebecca and all she cares for.
An inspiration for Cole is Kruger from Elysium. Specifically his disregard for the rules. As Kruger kills his own boss to chase down Max, Cole has this same sort of blind rage.
He kills the man who killed Rebecca’s husband because he was about to kill her. Not to save her, but so that he could be the one to kill her. Rebecca is unaware until he reveals he was the one who killed the man who killed her husband. As both gangs descend upon the Sanctuary in a bloody gang war, he kills several members of Sanctuary and traps Rebecca and her daughters. The story comes down to a bloody battle between the two. Outsmarted one final time by Rebecca, he is killed, but not before he has seriously wounded\beaten her.
The fight scene between Max and Kruger in the movie Elysium is a major influence for the he end fight scene between Rebecca and Cole .
Similarities
Cole will be the better fighter, and will physically dominate Rebecca
As the fight progresses, it becomes more and more apparent that Cole is going to win
Cole will taunt and play with Rebecca as Kruger did with Max
Differences
Max and Kruger’s fight was all action. Rebecca will ultimately outsmart Cole .
Features
Intelligent, he is smarter than average, able to learn and adapt very quickly.
Knowledgeable, while not raised in the traditional sense to be educated, he has a natural desire to understand the world around him and use that knowledge for his personal gain.
A hunter. Heis patient and good at hiding just outside of view. One of his best skills is stalking his prey, learning how they tick, and setting up traps.
Prepared, life in prison taught him it is better to be prepared than to be hopeful. After his release, he joined a gang that would later become the marauders. He does not rely on the government, but he does rely on his gang.
Flaws
Rapists, even before the World ended he was a registered sex offender prone to stalking women. He had spent several years in prison for rape charges. When the world ended he had no reason to control his desires.
Murderer, in the service of his gang, the Marauders, he has killed many survivors while pillaging their supplies.
Aggressive, he does not shy away from a fight, oftentimes putting himself in harm’s way to protect the ones he cares for.
Egocentric, he does not care about others, he only cares about his needs. He is self centered.
Lets take a closer look at the road to the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence hide themselves from travelers.
Lets take a closer look at the perimeter of the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence have secured themselves from attacking bugs and marauders.
Lets take a closer look at the outskirts of the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence have store their materials and miscellaneous supplies.
Lets take a closer look at the residential area of the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence have secured themselves from bugs and each other.
Lets take a closer look at the heart of the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence have secured themselves from attacking bugs and marauders.
As I am writing chapter 2 I recognize there are some issues with Sanctuary. The security of this town does not make sense and I have a plan to fix this.
Introducing Jude, one of our main characters. He is the son of Nathan and Rebecca and brother to Eden.
As I write chapter 2 and try to introduce the next main character Jude, I find his current profession unappealing. Perhaps he needs to go in a different direction.
I go over some points that I was able to introduce in chapter 2’s first draft during week 1 of writing.
Introducing Oliver, the butcher. He receives meat from Jude and prepares it for the towns folk.
To make things better fall in line for the end of the story I am changing Rebecca to be a doctor.
Lets take a closer look at the wood outside of the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence secure resources.