Should I swap Rebecca's character with her teenage daughter?
I had an idea to replace Rebecca with one of her daughters. I had originally conceptualized her daughters younger. As in under 10. However, this could easily be shifter to introduce one or both of them as characters in the story. Here is a list of advantages and disadvantages to such a modification.
Advantage
potentially raise the stakes for the audience as her youth makes her capture even more tragic.
It would afford Nathan and Rebecca to separately attempt to rescue her.
A damsel in distress trope.
I could write the new world from a youth’s perspective, having grown up most or even all of her life in the aftermath.
Disadvantage
I would have to explain why sanctuary allowed her to be a scout.
Her mother would likely have protected her from such a duty if at all possible.
Her youth and inexperience would make it less likely she would be a valid candidate
Perhaps in the new world, the sanctuary has created a rite of passage ritual that all youngsters must follow. The rite of passage trope has been used to great effect in many stories in the genre. Most notably City of ember, how the main character became a runner.
Her gender would make her less likely to be chosen, as historically females have been placed in safer roles. This, however, might easily be overcome by the personality of the character. Perhaps she has a desire to find her father, which could have led her to cultivate the strength and skills necessary to be qualified for such a role. This non-traditional role for a female character may fit into a more modern expectation of a woman in this genre.
Strong female character trope
Other thoughts
Perhaps other characters, like Dearil, could also be modified to be younger. This shift in ages may allow me to make this a YA book. Later I will do some research into if this is even a good idea.
Lets take a closer look at the road to the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence hide themselves from travelers.
Lets take a closer look at the perimeter of the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence have secured themselves from attacking bugs and marauders.
Lets take a closer look at the outskirts of the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence have store their materials and miscellaneous supplies.
Lets take a closer look at the residential area of the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence have secured themselves from bugs and each other.
Lets take a closer look at the heart of the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence have secured themselves from attacking bugs and marauders.
As I am writing chapter 2 I recognize there are some issues with Sanctuary. The security of this town does not make sense and I have a plan to fix this.
Introducing Jude, one of our main characters. He is the son of Nathan and Rebecca and brother to Eden.
As I write chapter 2 and try to introduce the next main character Jude, I find his current profession unappealing. Perhaps he needs to go in a different direction.
I go over some points that I was able to introduce in chapter 2’s first draft during week 1 of writing.
Introducing Oliver, the butcher. He receives meat from Jude and prepares it for the towns folk.
To make things better fall in line for the end of the story I am changing Rebecca to be a doctor.
Lets take a closer look at the wood outside of the town of sanctuary, and see how the residence secure resources.